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jenna
hello,joanne
I'm jenna.
I't is homework today(10/22),please correct my english.


october 20.saturday cloudy

I will go to camping today.
I think it's really fun.
It's very pit-a-pat.
I will to sleep at novitiate but somewhat.
I think it's very hard.
I early go to camping so I anxiety my solution.

october 21.sunday cloudy

Today,I go to home.
It's really tired.
It's not fun.
I would like early go home.
So I will sleep.



Please correct my sentence.
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